Syntaxing

with David Bromige, Sherril Jaffe, Suzanne Benton Bria

(Tom)

no matter how real to us our talk about needing women was one walked in the room

(Suzanne)

but no matter how real to them their talk about needing women was one walked in the room

Tight Corner? (Tom)

Their talk was real to them. They said they needed women. One walked in the room

Tight Corner? (David)

Our talk was real to us. We needed women. One walked into the room

Tight Corner (Sherril)

Nothing was real to them. They needed women. One walked into the room

Sentencing? (Tom)

They really needed a women but one walked in the room.

Sentencing (David)

He didn’t need a women after I came in.

A Pat Nolan Poem (David & Tom)

We were talking We needed women and after one came in we kept on talking

21, 24 February 1975